pls check this out,correct me if i am wrong

[Unregistered]

I am asking your gracious heart to give this matter an utmost concern.
- is this correct or not?

pls paraphrase it for me...theinks1

[tedtmc]

I would like to appeal to your graciousness to give the matter your urgent attention.

(I am not sure whether you asking for concern or action. To me, 'concern' does not mean anything unless it is follow by action.)

not a teacher