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Would you please help us to double check the text and grammatically for attached document in Spanish (highlighted in blue)? We would like to ensure that the translation is correct. We are appreciate for your help.

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Originally Posted by Zoe2008

Would you please help us to double check the text and grammar in the attached document in Spanish (highlighted in blue)? We would like to ensure that the translation is correct. We appreciate your help.

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Hi Anglika,

Is this revsion will be better?

Would you please help us to double check attached text and grammar hightlighted in blue in Spanish? We would like to ensure that the translation is correct. We appreciate your help.

Thanks
Zoe

Try:

Would you kindly check for correct grammar in the Spanish sentences highlighted blue in the attached text.

Yes, this is simple and better. Thanks