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| It refers to that "Both love and career are successful". I fear "love...made" would sound like "make love" and cause misunderstanding. |
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| Quote:
How about: Both love and career seem to go hand in hand perfectly. or perhaps: There is a perfect balance between love and career. |
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| I like the terser one. How about: A perfect balance between love and career! |
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| Very nice!! |
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| Forgot to mention, though, NH, that it's not a sentence but still sounds nice if it's used as a title or maybe a thought added at the end of a sentence ( there is no verb here as you probably know). |
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