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[Zoe2008]

The latest shipment date for these rework goods is in Feb 2009. We are try to request the factory for an early schedule and hope to ship them before CNY holiday. Will keep you posted on any update.

The beneficiary information is based on our PO shown. Please confirm whether the PO is correct or not?

Is there any update for the customs document? Your application is over 20 days. Please advise when you will collect the goods. We are unable help to store them without end.

[Anglika]

The latest shipment date for these reworked goods is in Feb 2009. We are trying to persuade the factory to implement an earlier schedule and hope to ship them before CNY holiday. Will keep you posted on any update.

The beneficiary information is based on our PO shown. Please confirm whether the PO is correct or not?

Is there any update for the customs document? Your application was made 20 days ago. Please advise when you will collect the goods. We are unable to store them indefinitely.

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