the word "you"

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in an essay i did about cheating, i wrote things like "if YOU are a nascar fan, YOU probably remember...." "that YOU will read about..."

instructor said to avoid the "YOU", but what do i replace it with????

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in an essay i did about cheating, i wrote things like "if YOU are a nascar fan, YOU probably remember...." "that YOU will read about..."

instructor said to avoid the "YOU", but what do i replace it with????

There are different ways of wording it:

Anyone who's a nascar fan will probably remember

If you cannot think of a way to reword something, take a break and come back to it.