Is this title correct?

#1 (**permalink**) 17-Jul-2003, 21:18

Hi, I'm writing a report and I need to know if my report title is correct:

Implementation of Paperless Offices by Using Intranet

Thanks!

**RonBee** · #2 (**permalink**) 17-Jul-2003, 22:40

It's hard to judge a title that is disconnected from the text, but don't you mean "by using the Internet"?

**Tdol** · #3 (**permalink**) 18-Jul-2003, 20:59

Implementation of Paperless Offices by Using Intranets

I prefer this.

**RonBee** · #4 (**permalink**) 18-Jul-2003, 22:18

That's probably what she had in mind.

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#5 (**permalink**) 18-Jul-2003, 22:22

I'd go for Tdol's suggestion.

**Tdol** · #6 (**permalink**) 19-Jul-2003, 18:50

How about 'Implementation of Paperless offices through Intranets??

#7 (**permalink**) 21-Jul-2003, 13:52

Quote:

Originally Posted by tdol

How about 'Implementation of Paperless offices through Intranets??

These are a good suggestions. Thanks TDOL!

**Tdol** · #8 (**permalink**) 22-Jul-2003, 00:33

You could also puch the boat out and go for something like 'Intranet based implementation of paperless offices.'

PS- how about 'paper free'?

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