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Old 06-Jan-2009, 20:36
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Default Please edit my essay about drugs

Harmful Effects of Drugs
People always use some kinds of drugs. Despite effect of drug millions of people constantly consume different legal and illegal drugs.
That have affected people's mind and changing their behavior, sometimes people are aggressive and do crimes. Drugs become one of the most threatening factors. For example, drugs alter normal body functions. When you take drug you can do much harm to themselves and other people. As a result, narcotics are very harmful to health. If people often use drugs, they can not survive without them. Also narcotics are very expensive. Some people use drugs because they want to try something new, relax, to forget the problems. Now in the world smokes a lot of people. Tobacco – one of the world's best selling drugs.
Antiquities people knew the drug. Person has not been using drugs much, and they could not do such damage. (As now) I believe drugs can disrupted people, change their behavior and affect others. So do not take drugs and your life will be better.

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