my mistakes

[ofd]

Dear All,
May I know my mistakes in the following sentences?
1. I’ll give you my phone number after I moving house next week.
2. Maurizio hopes to get a job once he finish university.
3. You’ll be here by lunchtime if you could takes the 9:00 am flight.
4. You’ll see the bus stop on your right when you comes out the station.
Many thanks in advance

[2006]

Dear All,
May I know my mistakes in the following sentences?
1. I’ll give you my phone number after I moving house next week.
2. Maurizio hopes to get a job once he finish university.
3. You’ll be here by lunchtime if you could takes the 9:00 am flight.
4. You’ll see the bus stop on your right when you comes out the station.
Many thanks in advance

1 ...after I move next week.
2 ...once he finishes university.
3 ...if you take the 9 am flight. You don't need ":00".
4 ...when you come out (of) the station.