
Originally Posted by
phoenixqn81
I understood the phrase "if not more so" but just worry about the dash before if and the brevity typical of conversation in this sentence:
"Taking me for example, no harm is done to the education of my children, who change schools regularly - if they keep the same system, as in our Army schools"
please give me some samples so that I can learn more of it.
Sorry for not telling my question clear making you troubled.
Phoenix
The dash really has nothing to do with the "if". Somewhat like a colon, a dash designates a strong relationship between what preceeds it and what follows. Or, much more eloquently, in the words of Sheridan Baker (the emphases are mine):
The dash says aloud what the parenthesis whispers. Both enclose interruptions too extravagant for a pair of commas to hold. The dash is the more useful
—since whispering tends to annoy—and will remain useful only if not overused. It can serve as a conversational colon.
If can set off a concluding phrase—
for emphasis. It can insert a full sentence—a clause is really an incorporated sentence—directly to a key word. The dash allows you to insert—with a kind of shout!—an occasional exclamation. You may even insert—and who would blame you?—an occasional question.
The dash affords a structural complexity with all the tone and alacrity of talk. S. Baker, The Complete Stylist and Handbook, 3rd ed. New York: Harper & Row, 1984, p. 403.
To come to grips with brevity, the best way is to read poetry, perhaps the lyrics of pop songs, and to figure out each text for yourself.