Help with punctuation marks

#1 (**permalink**) 03-Dec-2004, 06:36

Did I add all necessary punctuation marks to this sentence.

Serving on the task force are: Carly Fiorina, Hewlett-Packard; Meg Whitman, eBay; and Marjorie Magner, Citigroup.

Casiopea · #2 (**permalink**) 03-Dec-2004, 08:30

Quote:

Originally Posted by jenniedepue

Did I add all necessary punctuation marks to this sentence.

Serving on the task force are: Carly Fiorina, Hewlett-Packard; Meg Whitman, eBay; and Marjorie Magner, Citigroup.

This is how I'd structure it:

Serving on the task force are Carly Fiorina from Hewlett-Packard, Meg Whitman from eBay, and Marjorie Magner from Citigroup.

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