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| The foundation manages private gifts for the benefit of the university thus assuring the donor that the purpose for which funds were donated will be honored. Better?: ... university, thus assuring the donor ... or: ... university, thus, assuring the donor ... or eliminate "thus"?: ... university, assuring the donor ... |
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| The sentence is awkard, and I suggest you avoid the "thus" Re-writing it: To assure donors the purpose of their donations will be honored, the foundation will manage private gifts to benefit the university. But as a possible donor, it still does not make me feel good. How about: Because the Foundation manages private gifts for the benefit of the university, each donor is assured that the purpose of their gift will be honored. |
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