- 1 Post By Anglika
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A Promise un kept
Door bell ranged, I looked at wall clock, and it showed 4 p.m. And watched through peephole, aliya was standing another side of the door. I opened door she wildly jumped over me, and I hugged her warmly. I was feeling too happy to see her, as always she promise me, she would come to our back for some vacations. Her cute smiling face, tall height and with a good physical feature, where so changed even beyond recognition. She went to the Lahore three years ago, to study MBBS in the Lumhs.
She came inside and went directly to the sitting room. I closed the door and followed her. She was not only my sister but very good friend. We had struggled hard in life together and come up hard way. I was still confused on his unexpected presence. I know at the hindsight it was obvious the she had never intended to keep her promises. I moved a side she entered inside home in the direction of the sitting room. I closed the door and followed her. She went to the washroom to refresh herself.
Aliya sat down on sofa, and I brought coffee for her. She was very happy; she told me about her college and exam she gave last month. I had been listening with a great enthusiasm. She looked me up from the coffee she was sipping and smiled at me and adjusted to get more comfortable position. Before she can say something mobile started ranging up! We say each other, but either of us did not picked up the phone and mobile kept on ranging.
I awakened by restless ringing of the mobile alarm. I struggled hard to sit up blearily –eyed. Clock on the corner table showed it was eight o’clock in the morning. I sat up in a daze and drowsily moved my eyes to search aliya, and thought of another broken promise. After while I could remember it was alarm to get up early so I can pick aliya from station as she was coming from Lahore. I jumped out of the bed to get ready.
After ten minutes I came out of my room, hastily dressed, and picked all my personal belonging. As soon I opened the main door, oh! My God what I could see, aliya was already standing there to knock the door. I was frozen for a while after giving her glimpse, she hugged me and I could see tears coming out from her eyes. I picked up all her luggage and followed her to sitting room..
kindly end this story beautifully..
kindly marked me out of 30. and tell me ways to improve these mistakes.
Re: check this out please..
Originally Posted by Jamalmemon
Re: check this out please..
thanks ANGLIKA. but I was hoping that you`ll mark me up to for this..
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