Rain and Dream

[NewHope]

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It began to rain when I was in my sleeping dream, and continued pouring at noon. Anything under the skies looked whitish, wet around: streets, vehicles, trees, roadside buildings and popped up umbrellas. Apparently the rain had washed away the noise and fickleness of the city, along with dust in the air ever blowing around like gossamer fickleness.

[blacknomi]

While I was dreaming, it began to rain. It continued pouring till noon. Anything under the skies looked whitish, wet around: steet, vehicles, trees, street buildings and umbrellas that popped up like mushrooms. Apparently, the rain had washed away the noise and fickleness of the city, along with dust in the air that blows like the fickleness of the gossamer.

[NewHope]

But "umbrellas that popped up like mushrooms" sounds wordy, and 'that blows like the fickleness of the gossamer" seems unrecognizable.

[blacknomi]

I don't talk much, dear NewHope!

[AintFoolin]

> looked whitish, wet around

the 'around' is a problem as it's not clear what it's referring to, maybe just 'whitish and wet'