Grade my Argument essay

[mejiar81]

can you please grade my argument essay.

[heidita]

Hi mejiar, I would like to point out that I believe you did not want to say this:


Is abortion under any circumstance wrong?


This means: Do you think abortion is wrong at all? Is abortion wrong, I think it is not.

I think you wanted to say: Is abortion wrong under all circumstances? Or : Is abortion always wrong?

I have read only the first page, even considering that you wanted to emphasize the fact that we are talking about a 9-year-old girl, this fact is repeated too often.

[mejiar81]

Thank you for your suggestions.