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| The setting for the premiere promised to be as grand, if not more, than the film itself. I don't think the underlined part is correct. I think it should be "to be as grand, if not more than, as the film itself". Do you agree with me? Thanks. |
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| original might be ok yours is definitely wrong. i understand what you're trying to do with the agreement/parallelism, but no i would say 'if not more SO,' Last edited by AintFoolin; 20-Dec-2004 at 16:14. |
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