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Old 20-Dec-2004, 10:04
Joe Joe is offline
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Default if not more than

I saw a sentencel like this:
The setting for the premiere promised to be as grand, if not more, than the film itself.

I don't think the underlined part is correct. I think it should be "to be as grand, if not more than, as the film itself". Do you agree with me? Thanks.
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Old 20-Dec-2004, 16:10
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Default Re: if not more than

original might be ok
yours is definitely wrong. i understand what you're trying to do with the agreement/parallelism, but no

i would say 'if not more SO,'

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