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  1. 20-Dec-2004, 16:03 #1
    piggy386
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    Default Parallelism

    "The longer it stores in the water, the bigger size of pearl will produce."

    Are these sentences making a parallel?

    If not, please advise how to fix it. Thanks.

  2. 21-Dec-2004, 03:30 #2
    Tdol
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    Default Re: Parallelism

    They are, but I'd change 'stores' to 'stays'.
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