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Is the following sentence correct?

People think, "If the skirt looks so pretty when models wear it, it will look pretty on me".

Thanks a lot!

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Is the following sentence correct?

People think, "If the skirt looks so pretty when models wear it, it will look pretty on me".

Thanks a lot!

Gramatically, yes the sentence is correct.

The thought behind it, though is probably not. I know that a skirt on a model looks very different than the same skirt on me!

I am not a teacher.