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**peter123** · 12-Apr-2009, 15:30

Hi ther
Please proofread the following sentence:

The snack bar serves junk food with oil, fat and too much sugar.

tks
pete

**Soup** · 12-Apr-2009, 15:41

Hi peter123

What about?

Ex: The snack bar serves junk food that is oily, fatty, and has too much sugar.

**peter123** · 13-Apr-2009, 01:08

Hi there,

Tks a lot.

But is it correct to say like this?

The snack bar serves junk food with too much oil, fat and sugar.

tks
pete

**susiedqq** · 13-Apr-2009, 01:13

The snack bar serves junk food made with too much oil, fat and sugar.

or

The snack bar serves junk food containing too much oil, fat and sugar.

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