line 3 >> "upper management"
line 4 >> Trained new employees to carry out daily database maintenance
The following passage is from a sample resume. Plz spot the errors and correct them. Thnx:)
I myself can only see one error: Line 4: train--> trainedARL Trading Company, Beijing 6/2007 – 2/2009
- worked as a database analyst
- produced reports to upper managements monthly
- train new employees on topics related with daily database maintenance
- supplied data extracts to other departments
- fulfilled temporary jobs
Can't see any other errors.![]()
line 3 >> "upper management"
line 4 >> Trained new employees to carry out daily database maintenance
The following passage is from a sample resume. Plz spot the errors and correct them. Thnx:)
Quote:
ARL Trading Company, Beijing 6/2007 – 2/2009
- worked as a database analyst
- produced reports to upper managements monthly
- train new employees on topics related with daily database maintenance
- supplied data extracts to other departments
- fulfilled temporary jobs
I myself can only see one error: Line 4: train--> trained
Can't see any other errors.![]()
your resume is in the past-tense but line no. 3 where u told that u trained new employees is in the present tence. i think it should also be in the past tense like " trained new employees ........ ". i hope this helps :)