Are the punctuations in the following sentence correct or is there a better way (any other comments about the sentence will be welcome too):
My words and smiles are only short interludes between feelings of vast emptiness, a deep, eerie silence that no sound can break, an utter loneliness that no company can relieve.
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- 15-Jun-2009, 16:18 #1
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Punctuation Are the punctuations in the following sentence correct or is there a better way (any other comments about the sentence will be welcome too):
My words and smiles are only short interludes between feelings of vast emptiness, a deep, eerie silence that no sound can break, an utter loneliness that no company can relieve.
- 15-Jun-2009, 16:20 #2
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Re: Punctuation My words and smiles are only short interludes between feelings of vast emptiness; a deep, eerie silence that no sound can break; an utter loneliness that no company can relieve.
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