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Old 17-Jun-2009, 09:00
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Exclamation Sentence Construction

Hello Guys,

I've got a headline that says "We are family made up of 5 brothers".

So my question is: Should I use "that is" before "made up of". So we get the headline: We are family that is made up of 5 brothers".


What is the better construction for that headline?

Thanks in advance,
Sascha
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Old 17-Jun-2009, 09:09
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There is a reduced (that is) relative clause in your sentence. Newspapers like to spare spaces.
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We are a family of 5 brothers. That's all you need!
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We are a family of 5 brothers. That's all you need!
But is it still possible to use "We are a family made up of 5 brothers?"
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But is it still possible to use "We are a family made up of 5 brothers?"
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