Pl. check my discount letter

[dhara]

Dear Teacher

Pl. check my below discount letter and advice me.
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Sub : Reducing Discount on Price List

Dear Sir,

We invite your kind attention of our discount rate on price list. You are now requested consider discount __________ on our prices list + C.S.T extra as applicable. This discount rates effective from 1st July,2009. We have to need increase our price due to increase in Cast Iron Raw Material rates day to day, which is effecting in our products.

So therefore, we seek your prior approval before dispatching the order.

We seek your kind cooperation of the above matter and ensuring always of best quality, reliability and prompt service. If you have any query please call to us on above mention phone number.

Thanking you.
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Regards
Dhara

[sarat_106]

Dear Sir,

We invite your kind attention to (of) our discount rate on price list. You are now advised to accept a (requested consider) discount of __________ on our price list + C.S.T extra as applicable. This discount rate is effective from 1st July,2009. We have no other option than to (need) increase our price due to rise (increase) in the prices of Cast Iron Raw Material (rates) day by (to) day, which affects (is effecting in) our production cost.

(So) Therefore, we seek your prior approval before dispatching the order.

We seek your kind cooperation in (of) the above matter and assure you always in ensuring the (of) best quality, reliability and prompt service. If you have any query please call on (to) us in the (on) above mentioned phone number.

Thanking you.
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Regards
Dhara

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