See my suggested amendments above. You are right that it is too long for a covering letter - it will presumably accompany your CV which will have much more information. This letter simply needs to introduce the reasons why you think you would be perfect for the job.I am not completely pleased with it and I have found it to be a bit too long (my signature starts to go onto a second page). However, I don't know what to cut while still highlighting my skills and qualifications. I am writing this is for a cashier position at a local decorette shop and I want this cover letter to be really, really good. They say they want someone reliable, team-oriented, energetic, self-motivated, and have strong customer service skills and I feel like I could add more about why I believe I have each of these skills (and I admit some of the paragraphs may be awkwardly placed). The problem is that it might extend down to two pages if I did . Sorry, but I'm kind of a perfectionist when it comes to these things and this [cover letter] is really bugging me.
Dear Hiring Manager,
Use either "FAO HR Manager" or "Dear + title + surname" (In my opinion, you should find out the name of the person in charge of personnel and address it to him/her.)
I came across a job openingI would like to apply for the X position at [Company Name] as advertised on [Job posting site] on [date]. I am very interested in applying to this position asI believe I have the rightideal combination of skills and qualifications for this position.
I have been volunteering at [Volunteer/ company name- it's a cat shelter] for the past year. I enjoy challenging myself,
seeing how fast I can clean while still doing exceptionally well.cleaning as quickly as possible while still doing an exceptional job. I’ve had several comments from employees who thought I was the best volunteer worker they’ve had and greatly appreciated my service. A volunteer worker that had got me working there also complimented me on how fast I worked.I have received many complimentary comments from other volunteers regarding my work. I get along very well with both employees and customers have chatted with customers that stop by to see the cats,and I enjoy giving the customers as much information as I can about the cats. answering as much as I can about them. I love working there that I even wake up at six to start my day and arrive there when the store opens.I am always there at 6am when the shelter opens.
I study at [School] where I am majoring in X.I am currently studying [subject] at [name of school] and I am maintaining a 4.0 GPA. I study as much I can, even starting my studies almost as soon as I wake up. Because of my extensive studying, I am ahead of most (if not all) of the students in my class, even covering assignments and studies weeks ahead of time.I always like to be ahead, so studyingI study materials the weekimmediately they are assigned. or studying material at the same time everyone else is makes me feel that I am or might be falling behind. Currently, I am maintaining a 4.0 GPA
I work as well in teams
as wellas I do alone . - I can benefit from either even though working in teams may be very helpful for me. I am known to look up as much as I can (even before the project is officially assigned) toI contribute to thegroups and suggest ideas to make projects or worktasks go as smoothly as itthey can, and I am always eager to help others.
habits andexperience showsdemonstrates that I have the right skills and qualifications and I sincerely hope you will deeplyconsider my application so I can further my experience, and utilize and develop moremy skills. or bring others to light.I willwould be very excited to work with you. here if I am considered for the job.
If you would like
to talk or make an interviewmore information or to set up an interview, please contact me byat my email address above.
Yours sincerely (if you start it with Dear + title + surname),
Yours faithfully (if you start it with FAO HR Manager or with Dear Sir/Madam)
- For Teachers