Reflection Paper (2 page double space)

Hi, I'm writing an reflection paper about a movie called "Revolutionary Road". I have to give examples from the movie and my life and how it is related to Gender stereotypes, gender discrimination and androcentrism. I hope you guys can help me edit my work. If there is any "useless" sentence that just ruin the flow you can remove it. Thank you in return.
[I just need your an email because I have to upload in a website that check for plagiarism and if the website picks up this forum...than it will complicate things...I hope you guys understand ]

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Originally Posted by Kakashiprince

Hi, I'm writing an reflection paper about a movie called "Revolutionary Road". I have to give examples from the movie and my life and how it is related to Gender stereotypes, gender discrimination and androcentrism. I hope you guys can help me edit my work. If there is any "useless" sentence that just ruin the flow you can remove it. Thank you in return.
[I just need your an email because I have to upload in a website that check for plagiarism and if the website picks up this forum...than it will complicate things...I hope you guys understand ]

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Sure i'll take a look. My email is email deleted, Please do not give your contact details on a public forum.

In any case, we cannot condone cheating.

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Originally Posted by Kakashiprince

[I just need your an email because I have to upload in a website that check for plagiarism and if the website picks up this forum...than it will complicate things...I hope you guys understand ]

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We do not condone cheating. This thread is closed

I have now re-opened the thread, for reasons discussed elsewhere.

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