I'm studying on my own to do an exam in september and I'm sure this letter could be improved, but I don't know how!
Thanks!
Laura García Arenal
C/Mayor 8
Cáceres
The Manager
Lake Garda Ski Resort
Italy
Cáceres, August 23th , 2012
Dear Sir/Madam:
The
aim purpose of this letter is to request further information about Lake Garda Ski Resort. We
(?) have read the information leaflet in our
(?) travel agency, and there are still some points that we
(?) would like to clarify.
Firstly First, we
(?) would like to know if there are any interesting cultural visits in the surroundings, as such villages of historical interest, museums, etc. As well, we
(?) are interested in natural landscapes and excursions
in the nature near the Ski Resort. Particularly, we are interested in excursions that could be made with children. Regarding
to both
this these kind
s of visits (cultural tours and excursions in the nature) we
(?) would like to know if there are guided tours.
Second
ly, we
(?) are interested in nature sports near the Resort. In particular, we
(?) would like to recieve information about canoeing and rafting in the area.
Last
ly,
we wanted to ask which what are the months of the skiing season
?
Looking forward to recieve all the information you
could can send us, we
(?) would like to thank you
four for your attention.
Yours
faithfully, sincerely,
Laura García Arenal