What do You think of my grammar? THANK YOU!
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Re: What do You think of my grammar? THANK YOU!
Thank YOU, Gillnetter! :-D
It was very helpful!
I wish You a great success!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Here's my new version:
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Re: What do You think of my grammar? THANK YOU!
Hi wishsuccess4u. This appears to be cross-posted at http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/ed...tml#post917268
I offered some thoughts for you there. Good luck!