Re: Healthcare that leaves you.. dead ( please check for grammar& stylistics errors
I'm not keen on the use of "This woman", "some drug" and "some other drug". They sound very casual. For the first paragraph, I would have said:
Originally Posted by Brakha
A woman was prescribed a drug by her gynaecologist, but the drug caused Quincke's oedema. She was rushed to hospital but was released shortly after, having been given a different drug.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.