Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
My hobby is painting, which brightens my life. Painting is the language of creative mind. It benefits me by broadening my thoughts. I gain self-esteem and a confidence I never knew I possessed. Through painting I discover in myself a greater appreciation of the beauty of nature.
Re: creative thoughts
As written, "creative mind" requires an article. Generally, "the" would be the article of choice, though "a" is acceptable.
Originally Posted by Ashiuhto
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