Message to a social network
I have recently thought of sending a feedback message to a social network, and I wish you would tell me if I made any errors:
"It would be better if people's comments did not disappear when they deactivate their account. That way, the abscence of certain comments would not be so confusing and inesthetic. So I suggest although someone's account could not be accessed, the comments they have left before deactivation should still be seen."
Did I miss any comma?
Is it too stilted? :D
“Time stays long enough for anyone who will use it.”
- Leonardo da Vinci