Re: Essay needs checking ASAP!
Welcome to the forum.
We cannot help with homework or assignments. If your essay is due on 23/9, then you have until that day to write the best essay you can. After it has been marked and you have seen your teacher's score and comments, you can come back to us to help explain any of the corrections.
I am going to close this thread now so that no-one accidentally corrects your essay.
Please note that your opening line should perhaps have been "Hi everyone". Saying "Hello to whoever you are" is not natural.
Last edited by emsr2d2; 22-Sep-2013 at 13:01.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.