Please correct this

[dhruva101]

I am a newbie here and not sure whether or not such posting are allowed here.
I have the following technical write-up and I would like this to be
corrected. Can some one please correct this ?
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Member system is the heart of the ABC business, which is the group
of many applications, called ASI's (Application system interfaces)
such as ADMIN, PAYROLL, COST, SECURITY, HR AND CONTRACTS. This
system is also key-in payroll information to down stream
applications such as Mastercare and utility systems. Member system
applications can be accessed either through GUI screens, developed
in VB.NET or through green screens developed in COBOL and CICS. Both
the applications share the common database, DB2. This system has
over 200 user interface screens, 100 batch Jobs and 1000 DB2 tables.
There will be 4 releases for a year under this system and the
quality of all the business solutions that require changes to member
system will be taken care by a team 10 quality analysts. Following
are the projects in which I have an active participation as a
project lead.
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Thank you,
Dhruva.

[dhruva101]

Thank you Jessy, It helps.. and looking forward..

[dhruva101]

Thank you Jessy for your suggestion. In fact, this is targetted to the recruiters. The intention is to describe the system that we are maintaining.


Thanks again for your suggestions.