I hope.....an interesting article!!!!!!!!!

[gx90t]

What is your favourite book or film?

Why do you like it?


Have you ever thought about an unespected end of your beloved life? It happens to me quiete recently and was when I saw a tearjacker film.

The film I have in mind was based on a novel entitled "A walk to remember".
The two protagonists of the plot are a shy and reserved girl and an extravagant but intelligent boy.
Their love was growing up very quikly until the girl dead of a serious illness.

In a first moment, you can say that the kind of films that I prefer are horrible. But I would like to ask you to be careful in saying it.
If you think, only, about the description of the sentiments that it try to share with the public, you can understand the amazing world that there are behind.

Although, I can say you, without any fear, that this kind of films only makes you think about the real life and show the world under a different light!



Can you correct it?Can you add or also delete for making it appears better and above all interesting????


thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by gx90t

Their love was growing up very quikly until the girl dead of a serious illness.

Say:

Their love was growing very quickly until the girl died of a serious illness.

[gx90t]

thank you very much for your correction!

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by gx90t

Have you ever thought about an unespected end of your beloved life? It happens to me quiete recently and was when I saw a tearjacker film.

Have you ever thought about the possible end of your life? It happened to me quite recently when I saw a tearjerker film.

[gx90t]

I would like to ask you,if there are other mistakes or improvements to do at my work!

If it is possible,I please you to correct them as soon as possible!

thank in advance!

[gx90t]

I know that you are busy but I would like to know your correction in my writing.

I please you!

Your corrections are really very useful to me!

[Svaneska]

possibly . . .

Have you ever thought about an unexpected end to your life? It happened to me quite recently when I saw a tearjerker film.

The film I have in mind was based on a novel entitled "A Walk to Remember". The protagonists of the plot were a shy and reserved girl and an extravagant but intelligent boy. Their love developed rapidly, until the girl died of a serious illness.

At first you might say/think that the kind of films I prefer are horrible/awful, but I would like to ask you to reserve judgement. If you think/reflect about/on the description of the sentiments that it tries to share with the public, you can understand the amazing world that lies behind.

Although I can say to you, without any fear that this kind of film only makes you think about real life and shows the world under a different light!

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by gx90t

this kind of films only makes you think about the real life and show the world under a different light!

This kind of film makes you think about real life and shows the world in a different light.