Macbeth thesis help... Please

[kharriman]

hi i was wondering if you could look over my thesis and let me know if it is strong enough thanks

my topic is to discuss the theme of fatalism vs self determination as it applies to the tragic outcome of Macbeth

this is what i came up with:
Macbeth's tragic outcome is directly related to his perplex physcological state caused by the fear that self determination cannot change destiny.

- Katie Harriman

[Anglika]

Welcome to the forums.

Hi I was wondering if you could look over my thesis and let me know if it is strong enough. thanks

My topic is to discuss the theme of fatalism vs self-determination as it applies to the tragic outcome of Macbeth

This is what I came up with:

Macbeth's tragic outcome is directly related to his perplex complex psychological state caused by the fear that self-determination cannot change destiny.

- Katie Harriman

Looks good.