Please correct the below letter
Date:15th October 2013.
L Vijaya Raghavan,
Emp No. 704,
SUB: Educational Qualification updation
I am having a great peasure to inform you that I have completed my M.Sc.(Chemistry) in Madurai kamaraj University last year. Due to recieving my provisional certificate by late, I can't update my Qualification as earlier. I hope this upgrade will help me to grow along with organization and also to face upcoming challenges. Herewith I enclosed a photocopy of provisional certificate. Please Kindly update my qualification with your records.
Re: Please correct the below letter
I am pleased to inform you that I received my Masters of Science degree in Chemistry from Madurai Kamaraj University last year. I look forward to applying my newly acquired knowledge to my job.
Because I only recently received my provisional certificate, I was unable to update my qualifications until now. I have enclosed a photocopy of my certificate. Please update the records to refelct my degree. Thank you.
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