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Some people have restrickted attitude towards Muslims. According to their mentality all Muslims women should wear Islamic dress and they won't go jogging. I noticed whenever, I go jogging they astonishingly look at me and my sports outfit.

Could you please fix my sentence. Thank you so much.
 

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Some people have restrickted attitude towards Muslims. According to their mentality all Muslims women should wear Islamic dress and they won't go jogging. I noticed whenever, I go jogging they astonishingly look at me and my sports outfit.

Could you please fix my sentence. Thank you so much.

I wouldn't say a "restricted attitude". It's not their attitude that's restricted surely. It's more that they think that Muslim women should be restricted in what the can do and wear, isn't it? (Note: not personal opinion, just trying to get to the bottom of what the OP is trying to say).

I would say:

Some people have a very narrow-minded (or blinkered) opinion towards Muslims. As far as they're concerned, all Muslim women should wear traditional Islamic clothing and they shouldn't go jogging. I have noticed that whenever I go jogging, people look at me and my sports clothing in amazement!
 
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