Traffice Problem Paragraph.

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esophea

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Can any one help me improve my writing below ?

The traffice problem in the city is due to economic advancement in recent years. To solve this issue, the governement should expand the roads and new traffic lights should be installed, along with the addition of new drving lanes.

Please give comment, mistake related to vocab use, or grammar errors, and make it eve more formal.

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The traffic problem in the city is due to economic advancement in recent years. To solve this issue, the government should upgrade the roads and new traffic lights should be installed, along with the addition of extra driving lanes.

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