[General] English recording for comments

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patran

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Dear Teachers

I have recorded a voice clip (below link) for your comments. I understand there are a lot for improvement. Please kindly advise what I should improve and how much your would give me out of 10. Look forward to your comments.

Testing_AT_In - YouTube


Regards

Anthony the learner
 

SlickVic9000

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It was pretty good overall. Your pronunciation was a little unclear at points, though. If you IM'd me your email, I could send you a recording of myself reading it, if that would help.
 

probus

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"Enrollment key to the scheme" which occurs twice in the seconds leading up to 01:04, was very hard for me to make out. I had to listen to the recording at least six times. But in its Hong Kong context it may well be perfectly OK.
 
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