[General] Letter of motivation

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Cristiana Macedo

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Hello. I'm new in the forum and I can't acess the forum rules. I'm looking for a job and I need to do a letter of motivation in english, I would like to know if someone could help me correcting:

"After my graduation in management and specialization in finance I am seeking an opportunity to start my professional career.
I have study during four years in Minho University in Portugal. With my academic studies I have obtained a graduation of three in management and a specialization in finance during the final year. I have developed my competences in corporate management, marketing, accounting, human resources and finance. My instruction and my courses allowed me to direct to the corporate management, which I would like to integrate in the future.
I have acquired capabilities of analyze, managing, planning and anticipating the economics and financial aspects of an organization incorporated in his competitive market.
I have done, as well, an internship in an assurance corporate during three months, in Portugal, where I had the functions of customer service and I helped planning and controlling sales objectives and customer retention.
I am motivated, young, responsible, punctual, dynamic, rigorous, active, adaptable, patient and ready to integrate your organization. I learn fast and I am eager to do acquire more competences and be defied.
On the other hand, my English language skills are strong, I have moderate competences in French (which I am developing in the moment) and my mother language is Portuguese. I have, also, solid software skills, especially with Microsoft Office and internet research.
Considering my academic training and professional experience, I hope my application may be accepted in the selection process. I am available for any necessary clarifications and/or to book an interview.
I offer my best regards and thank the attention made available."


Thanks in advance
Cristiana
 

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After my graduation in management and specialization in finance, I am seeking an opportunity to start my professional career.
I have studied for four years in Minho University in Portugal. With my academic studies, I have graduated with three years in management and a specialization in finance during the final year. I have developed my competencies in corporate management, marketing, accounting, human resources, and finance. My instruction and my courses have allowed me to direct corporate management which I would like to do in the future.

I have acquired the capabilities of analysis, managing, planning, and anticipating the economics and financial aspects of an organization engaged in this competitive market.

I have done, as well, an internship in an insurance corporation for three months, in Portugal, where I performed the functions of customer service and I helped planning and controlling sales objectives and customer retention.

I am motivated, young, responsible, punctual, dynamic, rigorous, active, adaptable, patient and ready to integrate with your organization. I learn fast and I am eager to do acquire more competencies and be challenged.

On the other hand, my English language skills are strong, I have moderate competency in French which I am developing at the moment and my native language is Portuguese. I have, also, solid software skills, especially with Microsoft Office and internet research.

Considering my academic training and professional experience, I hope my application may be accepted in the selection process. I am available for any necessary clarifications and I am available to schedule an interview.

I offer my best regards and thank you for your attention.
 
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