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Teacher, can you check this paragraph. Thank you.


You have asked me to call Jenny's mother to arrange a meeting and I have not been able to get hold of her. I left her a message a few days ago and till now I have not received a call from her. I called her twice today, one in the morning and one after 5 p.m., and there was no answer and I decided not to leave another message. Maybe I should write a letter to her. She and family may be away on vacation.
 

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please check this paragraph

Teacher, can you check this paragraph. Thank you.


You have asked me to call Jenny's mother to arrange a meeting and I have not been able to get hold of her. I left her a message a few days ago and till now I have not received a call from her. I called her twice today, [STRIKE]one[/STRIKE] once in the morning and [STRIKE]one[/STRIKE] once after 5 p.m., and there was no answer and I decided not to leave another message. Maybe I should write a letter to her. She and her family may be away on vacation.


februar, no teacher
 
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