[Essay] Please help me

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mer24

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Hello, please could you correct me this letter of aplication? the level is for FCE. thank you very much.:up::up::up:


Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you concerning the study grants advertisement, which I saw in Monday’s issue “The Guardian” and I would apply for a grant to study English in one of your schools this summer.

The reason why I am interested in this English course is because I am keen to improve my English and would like the opportunity to practice my English with native speakers. And I am considering studying my degree in the UK when I finish the school.

I need this grant because I can’t afford to study in UK. In my family we are 6 siblings and this could be my opportunity to study abroad and learn about the British culture and the way of life there. It would be better for me if I could be in your London school as I have my aunt living there.

I am available for interview at any time and look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
Mercedes
 

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you concerning the study grants advertisement which I saw in Monday’s issue of “The Guardian”. I would like to apply for a grant to study English in one of your schools this summer.

The reason why I am interested in this English course is because I am keen to improve my English and would like the opportunity to practice my English with native speakers. And I am considering studying for my degree in the UK when I finish the school.

I need this grant because I can’t afford to study in UK. In my family, we have 6 siblings and this could be my opportunity to study abroad and learn about the British culture and the way of life there. It would be better for me if I could be in your London school as my aunt is living there.

I am available for an interview any time and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Mercedes
 
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