Could someone please check my POEM

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ss.226

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Life Is Good
I was running through the way
I was thinking it's okay
Not knowing what to say
Though I found a lovely display
Written on it have a happy life stay
Then I heard an awesome deejay
Two people came and gave me a dray
I saw in it a card that was belayed
So I toke it and saw a writing overlay
It was written on it "peace upon you and not affray
Take it easy and if it is not now it's today
Therefore enjoy your life and have a brilliant day"
So this is the life, don't give it away
 

hope2010

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Wanna check grammar? rhyme?

It sounds a nice one!
 
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