[Essay] Fukushima disaster

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Did44

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Hello,

Please check for errors (grammar, style) in this sentence I've translated from my language to English :

For the first time since the Fukushima nuclear plant disaster, a small quantity of plutonium has been detected in several ereas of the north-east Japan far away from the plant compound, announced the Japanese government last Friday, September 30, adding it would be useless worrying about these tiny quantities of radioactive plutonium.


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For the first time since the Fukushima nuclear plant disaster, a small quantity of plutonium has been detected in several [STRIKE]e[/STRIKE] areas of [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE]north-east Japan, far (away) from the plant compound, [STRIKE]announced[/STRIKE] the Japanese government announced last Friday, September 30, adding [STRIKE]it would be useless[/STRIKE] that there was no need to worry[STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] about these tiny quantities of radioactive plutonium.
 
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