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Now the link is in, thanks. ;-)
 

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Your pronunciation is excellent. Could you upload something where you're not reading- the problem with reading is that the intonation can be artificial because they're not your words- the reading's a bit bouncy at times (turning a page or two), but this isn't a problem with your speaking. :up:
 

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Thank you. ;-)

You're right, the intonation sounds a bit strange at times. I also noticed that it's read a little too "breathy". Unfortunately, I have no "unread" recordings. Only another read example - which I find rather hilarious, though. :-D

Rate Accent & Pronunciation: Where does the speaker come from? - YouTube
 

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Re: Non-native speaker's accent (BE)

Thank you. ;-)

You're right, the intonation sounds a bit strange at times. I also noticed that it's read a little too "breathy". Unfortunately, I have no "unread" recordings. Only another read example - which I find rather hilarious, though. :-D

Rate Accent & Pronunciation: Where does the speaker come from? - YouTube
Excellent! :up: :) (Incidentally, if you didn't write it, the writer has led you into making a slight mistake: at about 34" seconds you say /'faɪnəli:/ - an accurate reading of the printed word 'finally'. But , for sense, it should be 'finely' - pronounced, as I'm sure you know, /'faɪnli:/; an argument can be 'finely balanced' but not 'finally balanced'.)

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Re: Non-native speaker's accent (BE)

Thanks for your comment :)

But it is, in fact, "finally". Here is a 3 year old recording of the same text, showing the original excerpt in the background (which our professor gave us in class):

Received Pronunciation "The Grand Design" - YouTube
 

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Re: Non-native speaker's accent (BE)

Thanks for your comment :)

But it is, in fact, "finally". Here is a 3 year old recording of the same text, showing the original excerpt in the background (which our professor gave us in class):

Received Pronunciation "The Grand Design" - YouTube
I'm afraid 'finally' just doesn't work. The reader here is obviously reading from a text that has a typo in it, and because the text is so dense and complex they've lost track of the sense. It is, I suppose, just possible for the words 'finally' and 'balanced' to collocate (although BNC doesn't have an instance of it): you could say 'the argument is good, comprensive, and - finally - balanced'. But in your context the criticism is generally negative: 'Go away and do it again'; so this sort of collocation is ruled out.

On the other hand, 'finely balanced' is the third most common collocation of this sort:
1 FINELY CHOPPED 72
2 FINELY TUNED 44
3 FINELY BALANCED 25
4 FINELY SLICED 19
5 FINELY PROPORTIONED 12
6 FINELY GROUND 9
7 FINELY DICED 9
8 FINELY HONED 9
9 FINELY KNOTTED 8
10 FINELY GRATED 8
... [BK: there are well over 1000 in all.]
See more here: British National Corpus (BYU-BNC), using the search-string finely [*v] ;-)


PS Two words you might want to look up (and - p o s s i b l y use) are sesquipedalian and grandiloquent!
 
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Re: Non-native speaker's accent (BE)

I wouldn't say there was 'an improvement', as neither is RP. The first, as you say, is Kiwi-influenced. The vowel sounds in the second sounds to me as if there is a Northern influence (in, e.g. 'really an excellent plan', 'some of the doubts', 'in practice') - in fact it sounds a bit like a friend of mine from Shrewsbury (not that Northern. but definitely not Southern).

I initially put it at Yorkshire or Lancashire, but the second syllable of 'propose' does not have the pure [o] sound I'd excpect there. It seems to use [ǝʊ] (perhaps tending towards a triphthong, starting with something closer and less central - [e] perhaps. (I hung up my narrow transcription gloves many years ago, so this is the best I can do. :oops:). This [eǝʊ] sound is what made me think of my Shrewsbury friend - it's the sort of accent she'd put on at a vicar's tea-party (consciously correct). ;-)


So if when you say 'improved' you mean 'less unBritish' then the second one is that, to my ear.

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Ok, so we moved from Kiwi to British - but still with an audible German accent? :cry:
 

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Re: Non-native speaker's accent (BE)

Not audibly German - just with a slight 'twang' that puts the speaker some way to the north of southern England. (I didn't know you were German until I looked at your Member Info.) There are no obvious flaws in your accent! :up: ;-)

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Re: Non-native speaker's accent (BE)

Phew, so the work paid off. ;-) Thanks for all your comments. :)
 
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