are the sentences correct ?

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Omar Marrow

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Hi
have I made mistakes? :lol:

How have computers changed our lives? Yes, it is really a good question.

Computer has made our lives a lot of easier and convenient.

Computers can help us in many different ways in our lives.

Now with internet you can read all newspapers instead of buying them.

At first we had to go to school to get exam results but the schools announce the result of students in their web sites on the internet nowadays.

In addition, the computer helps the students in their studying.

There are several e-books and researches available from the internet.



Thank you for your reading and for comments.
:-D
 

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Hi
have I made mistakes? :lol:

How have computers changed our lives? Yes, it is really a good question.

Computer has made our lives a lot of easier and convenient.

Computers can help us in many different ways in our lives.

Now with internet you can read all newspapers instead of buying them.

At first we had to go to school to get exam results but the schools announce the result of students in their web sites on the internet nowadays.

In addition, the computer helps the students in their studying.

There are several e-books and researches available from the internet.



Thank you for your reading and for comments.
:-D

Is this homework?
 

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No, really, I want to improve my writing skills, so I have decided to write more.
I'm graduated.
 

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please, are the sentence correct?

Hi
have I made mistakes? :lol: This is not homework

How have computers changed our lives? Yes, it is really a good question.

Computer has made our lives a lot of easier and convenient.

Computers can help us in many different ways in our lives.

Now with internet you can read all newspapers instead of buying them.

At first we had to go to school to get exam results but the schools announce the result of students in their web sites on the internet nowadays.

In addition, the computer helps the students in their studying.

There are several e-books and researches available from the internet.



Thank you for your reading and for comments.



 

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Re: please, are the sentence correct?

Duplicating threads is quite unlikely to gain you any sympathies. Please ask each question once and (need I say) please be patient. We are all volunteers here, which means most members answer whenever they have the time to do so.

As a rule, being impatient or demanding an "urgent" answer will prove counterproductive.
 
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Re: please, are the sentence correct?

Thank you for your advice Chaliedeut.
 
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