Self made paragraph
I poured water from faucet into kettle. I put fresh ginger in the water. then I put the kettle on the fire , I turned on the fire, after a few minutes the water boiled . then I poured the water to a big bowl. I put brown sugar in the water. now I am drinking hot water with brown sugar , ginger .
Would you please be nice enough to correct my errors?
Re: Self made paragraph
For a start, I'm sure you know we don't put a space before a comma or a full stop, and that a new sentence (after a full stop) starts with a capital letter.