request to manager for getting family joining visa

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SUJOYKRISHNAN

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Dear sir,
I would like to bring my family from India with me here,
I kindly requesting you to do needful to getting me family joining visa for my wife and son as early as possible.
thanks &regards,



can you suggest some good stuff?
 
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Dear sir,
i would like to bring my family from India with me here,
i kindly requesting you to do needful to getting me family joining visa for my wife and son as early as possible
thanks &regards



can you suggest some good stuff

My first suggestion is that you repost this, using a capital letter at the beginning of every new sentence, and a full stop (or the relevant punctutation mark such as a question mark) at the end of each sentence. Using the correct style of written English is as important as the words. Do that first, and then we will look at the content.

Thank you.
 

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Dear sir,
Iam not well in english language, as you suggested I changed the said problems and saved, Please kindly help me on this matter
thanks&regards
sujoykrishnan
 

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letter for getting family visa

Dear sir,
I would like to bring my family from India with me here. For that I kindly requesting you to do needfull for getting me family visa for my Wife and Son.

thanks&regards
Name


Please kindly help me on this matter, I want to give one application to my manager for getting family visa, is this suits for that purpose?, Im not good in English language thats why im asking this silly question.
thanks&regards,
Sujoykrishnan.
 

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Re: letter for getting family visa

Please write your version and people may comment and make suggestions.
 

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Re: letter for getting family visa

Dear sir,
I would like to bring my family from India with me here. For that I kindly requesting you to do needfull for getting me family visa for my Wife and Son.

thanks&regards
Name
Dear Sir,

I would like to bring my family from India to join me here in Xxxx.

I should be grateful if you would start the the procedures necessary for me to obtain a family visa for my wife and son.

Yours faithfully,

Name
 

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Re: letter for getting family visa

Dear Sir,

I would like to bring my family from India to join me here in Xxxx.

I should be grateful if you would start the the procedures necessary for me to obtain a family visa for my wife and son.

Yours faithfully,

Name

I think "I should be grateful" should read 'I would be grateful'
 

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Re: letter for getting family visa

I think "I should be grateful" should read 'I would be grateful'
'Would' is more common for speakers of most varieties of English, but 'should' is correct. Indeed, for some speakers of southerrn BrE, it is the only acceptable form.
 
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