[Grammar] Please, check my Recommendation letter.Thank you!

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Neeka20

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Please, check this letter. I really need your help, because i am not native speaker and I can make mistakes here.


It is my immense pleasure to recommend one of my best students, Ms. Alla XXXX, into XXXX Project for the next academic year.


I have known Ms. Alla XXX, since 2004 when she was attending my courses in “Information Systems for Management” in the Department of System Analysis and Decision Making Theory. Both in class and during office hours I was impressed with her knowledge and professionalism. During the course of studies, her grades were exceptionally good. Alla assimilates new material very well; she has got a well developed ability for logical thinking. In order to achieve the highest grades and my deepest respect. She demonstrated very strong technical skills and pulled most of the weight on the programming assignments (which were done individually).This alone is a very strong endorsement for her abilities. I must also comment on Alla’s exceptional academic performance. In my opinion, she can be classified in the top 5%, which is undoubtedly the result of her hard and enthusiastic work.


In addition, her ability as a leader among other students and her confidence in a variety of challenges had brought her praise not just from me, but also from other members of the department.
I know of Alla's continued interest in programs related to international economics and finance. I feel confident that she will continue to succeed in her studies. I believe the Master’s Program will give her an opportunity to deepen the knowledge of Public Administration and European Integration as well as the possibility of using the experience gained in the research work.


Innovations are the key to development and development take place through the sharing of knowledge and experience. Mobility very important for countries with an economy that is just beginning to develop. Young specialists of these countries have a huge opportunity to get experience in the implementation and use of innovation through mobility programs and in the case of Ms XXX in sector of Public Administration and European Integration.


I have strong confidence that Ms. Alla XXXX is an excellent candidate for your program. And I’m sure you will find her to be a student whose talents will only shine further through your graduate program. It is my hope that you will accept her admission to your university. Feel free to contact me if you require further information.


Respectfully submitted,
 

billmcd

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Please, check this letter. I really need your help, because i am not native speaker and I can make mistakes here. (Everyone, including accomplished native speakers, make mistakes. I have suggested some minor changes, but in general, yours is a great letter. :up: )


It is my immense pleasure to recommend one of my best students, Ms. Alla XXXX, into XXXX Project for the next academic year.


I have known Ms. Alla XXX, since 2004 when she was attending my courses in “Information Systems for Management” in the Department of System Analysis and Decision Making Theory. Both in class and during office hours I was impressed with her knowledge and professionalism. During the course of studies, her grades were exceptionally good. Alla assimilates new material very well; she has got a well developed ability for logical thinking. [STRIKE]In order to achieve the highest grades and my deepest respect.[/STRIKE] She has demonstrated very strong technical skills and pulled most of the weight on the programming assignments (which were done individually).This alone is a very strong endorsement for her abilities. I must also comment on Alla’s exceptional academic performance. In my opinion, she can be classified in the top 5%, which is undoubtedly the result of her hard and enthusiastic work.


In addition, her ability as a leader among other students and her confidence in a variety of challenges [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] brought her praise not just from me, but also from other members of the department.
I know also of Alla's continued interest in programs related to international economics and finance. I feel confident that she will continue to succeed in her studies. I believe the Master’s Program will give her an opportunity to deepen the knowledge of Public Administration and European Integration as well as the possibility of using the experience gained in the research work.


Innovations are the key to development and [STRIKE]development [/STRIKE] take place through the sharing of knowledge and experience. Mobility is very important for countries with an economy that is just beginning to develop. Young specialists of these countries have a huge opportunity to get experience in the implementation and use of innovation through mobility programs and in the case of Ms XXX in sector of Public Administration and European Integration.


I have [STRIKE]strong[/STRIKE] extreme confidence that Ms. Alla XXXX is an excellent candidate for your program. And [STRIKE]I’m[/STRIKE] (try not to use contractions in formal correspondence) I am sure you will find her to be a student whose talents will only shine further through your graduate program. It is my hope that you will accept her request for admission to your university. Feel free to contact me if you require further information.


Respectfully submitted,

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