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I need to identify lingusitic feateures that affect cohesion and linguistic features that suggest the writer is a 2nd language user in the following text and would really appreciate any help that you can offer me.
Biomedical in health care is medical care and disease is seen as to conquer and cure disease it is to focus on disease not person. And concerned with what is normal and maked judgements about teh boundary between them. It is secured through a lengthy formal training. And the use of the biomedical model can be successful.
When you be sick go visit the doctors or hospital you expect to be examine and the doctor to tell you what is wrong with you what kind of disease do you have? And what treatment can you get and How long it is going to take. Aned when you receive your treatment and start proceeding with your medication. After you taken them you expert better to feel and see the different in your well being. When you see the breakthrough or accomplishment of medicinve from teh antibiotics you where prescribe by doctors and see that state of healthy is has improving that is when you that biomedicine has help you.
Biomedical in health care is medical care and disease is seen as to conquer and cure disease it is to focus on disease not person. And concerned with what is normal and maked judgements about teh boundary between them. It is secured through a lengthy formal training. And the use of the biomedical model can be successful.
When you be sick go visit the doctors or hospital you expect to be examine and the doctor to tell you what is wrong with you what kind of disease do you have? And what treatment can you get and How long it is going to take. Aned when you receive your treatment and start proceeding with your medication. After you taken them you expert better to feel and see the different in your well being. When you see the breakthrough or accomplishment of medicinve from teh antibiotics you where prescribe by doctors and see that state of healthy is has improving that is when you that biomedicine has help you.