Urgent Please correct my letter

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Ravivarma

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Dear Sir,
I bought a new vehicle on yesterday for own transportation to company. From today i plan my travel through my car. Hence grant me a travelling allowance from this day.
 

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Letterheads and titles/addresses are different in different areas. The OP needed help with the content of their letter.
 

emsr2d2

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Dear Sir,
I bought a new vehicle on yesterday for own transportation to company. From today i plan my travel through my car. Hence grant me a travelling allowance from this day.

I would expect you to know the name of the person in charge of the department which deals with travel allowances in your company. It would be much better if you could address your letter to him/her by name. If you are unable to do that, then I suggest the following:


Dear Sir

I am writing to advise you that with effect from yesterday's date, I will be travelling to work by car. On that basis, please grant me a travel allowance, starting yesterday.

Yours faithfully

[your name]
 
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