Prito
Member
- Joined
- Apr 9, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Hindi
- Home Country
- India
- Current Location
- United States
I made a story.
I woke up 7am. Then i went to the restroom .Then I had brush and took shower.
About 8am i had my breakfast.I read the newspaper while taking breakfast.
After that I went to school. My school time was 9am. I was little late in to school. Lunch break was around 1pm.Around 4pm my school was over.Then I came home. Then I had to cook my dinner.But I am so tired today.Thats why I ordered cheese pizza. After that I turned on the tv. And watched movie as eating pizza. Then I slept around 10pm.
Please tell me my mistakes. I am very thankful to you.
I woke up 7am. Then i went to the restroom .Then I had brush and took shower.
About 8am i had my breakfast.I read the newspaper while taking breakfast.
After that I went to school. My school time was 9am. I was little late in to school. Lunch break was around 1pm.Around 4pm my school was over.Then I came home. Then I had to cook my dinner.But I am so tired today.Thats why I ordered cheese pizza. After that I turned on the tv. And watched movie as eating pizza. Then I slept around 10pm.
Please tell me my mistakes. I am very thankful to you.